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V is for the Wonderful Vicinal Crabapple

Exploring the crabapple today, in its various wondrous avatars! Plus vondrous vords and books as always.

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The Very Wondrous Crabapple

Today’s NaPoWriMo prompt is inspired by Melissa Kwasny’s poem, “The Apple Tree in Blossom,” where she strings together several fantastical metaphors for the apple tree, before shifting into exclamations, definitions, and a series of nimble, tonal shifts – and seeming changes in topic – before circling around back to the apple tree. Today’s challenge asks us to write our own poem in which we use at least three metaphors for a single thing, include an exclamation, ruminate on the definition of a word, and come back in the closing line to the image or idea with which we opened the poem.

I looked at the crabapple tree

standing among others in the neighborhood nursery;
the pamphlet underneath sang to me in a list:
ancient healer of hidden harms,
witch-kettle whisperer,
a small sun caught in bark—

oh! which witches of old
cackled over cauldrons un-cold, chanting charms and curses
to fend off that cat who bothers my hummingbird friend—
leave her be!! leave her be!!

A red car, ready for a trip,
struck the knuckled trunk—
and there it was: the malus tree—
sprung—in the middle of the soccer field
(my son was playing a b-ball game there when it happened)—
as if roots could rewrite the ground,
as if it had always been there—

hidden binder of sweetness and bite—
verjuice, I read: the green, unripe truth of fruit,
a sour beginning, not yet ready, already itself—

and if you want something smaller,
look in the bonsai section:
malus halliana, a quiet catalyst,
a tree that practices being contained,
a vicinal thing—neighboring, nearly touching,
close enough to belong, not close enough to name—

I looked at the crabapple tree—

as if it had always been there

~ Vidya Tiru @ LadyInReadWrites

Vords

  • Velleity — a wish or intention too weak to become action
  • Verjuice — highly acidic juice juice from unripe grapes, crabapples, or other sour fruit
  • Vicinal — neighboring; nearby
  • Vuvuzela — a loud plastic horn often heard at sports events

V-Books

Very Special You by Emma Dodd for the very youngest readers is, like the title says, very special indeed. It is adorable and heartwarming.

Victricia Malicia: Book-Loving Buccaneer by Carrie Clickard, illus Mark Meyers

This one appealed to me because of the title, for I could easily have been a book-loving buccaneer in a past life! It is a romping read and younger readers will need some help with the vocabulary, but makes for a great read aloud.

And Now, the End of This Post

Dear reader, as always, which book/word appealed to you? Any recommendations for me?

2 thoughts on “V is for the Wonderful Vicinal Crabapple

  1. I haven’t heard of verjuice before.
    Good poem, good post.
    “Success is being able to complete what we set out to do – each individual action, each specific step, each desired experience whether a big project or a very small errand.” — Susan Collins

    J (he/him 👨🏽 or 🧑🏽 they/them) @JLenniDorner ~ Speculative Fiction & Reference Author and Co-host of the April Blogging #AtoZChallenge international blog hop

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